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“Kieyra, you might want to see this. A boy named Travis took real live video footage of two people from the hole talking about you at the Mississippi Lake Masquerade ball.” said Anna, running towards me. We had been here for three days now. My mom had decided to leave Anna and Katie at camp with me (Yay!!). Anna led me into Travis’ tent which had a bunch of technological stuff in it. They pressed play on Travis’ laptop. “how is project P. Doppelganger going?” asked a girl. I knew who she was; Alice Cullen. We had met after I turned and made the stupid bet. “Nothing, so far. She’s nothing like you know who.” That voice belonged to the mysterious D. I couldn’t tell who he was though- they were wearing masks. Alice sighed. “Just because she doesn’t act like her around you doesn’t mean she isn’t! You’re a bird!” D sighed. “We have to be careful.”Alice finally said. “But we’ve been careful!” D shouted angrily. “We taught her right from wrong; we taught her to be a selfless, humble person. But even now, I don’t think there’s anything we can do to mess around with fate and destiny and the natural order of the universe. So, she will never be identical to her ancestor. Big whoop! It only matters what’s inside her mind, and how it’s programmed. Face it,Alice. There’s nothing we can do to stop it.” “Stop being so negative!” snapped Alice. “One day, she is going to realize that in our world it’s kill or be killed, and I don’t want it to be too late when she does.” Said D. Alice sighed again. “She is not gonna be killed!” She yelled. “She’s actually one of the strongest people like us in the world!” Alice yelled. “You consider 300 strong?” he asked. I growled at the screen. “Ugh, she’s not really in the three hundreds, stupid! I created another list to keep her from being power hungry. I replaced the last number with a 5 instead of a 6. See for yourself.” Said Alice. What???? The website I knew was a fake. I typed in the real address on my ipod and clicked enter. Right there, in the number three spot In every category, was the name Kieyra Katherine Mary Gordon. My name. I was number three. “Like ancestor, like doppelganger.” Muttered D, looking at Alice’s iphone screen. “We don’t even know if she’s a doppelganger yet. We know there’s a prophecy- that’s about it.” Alice said. The video cut to static.
2 people from the hole? How? Why? How did he know they were from the hole? How and why did Travis get footage of them? Who is 'she'? What is the natural order? Why do you want to stop it? What is the prophecy? Doppelganger again? Is she? AGH!!!!!!!! Get writing! I have to know! This is a great story!
ReplyDeletei like the word doppelganger. its my favorite. i am typing up chapter 10 right now; will be done soon and posted.
ReplyDeleteYay!!!!!!!!!!! I am glad you LIKE the word...that isn't the point! What is it doing in your story? AGGGHHHHH....why?????????
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