Here's a little excerpt from it. This part's from the main character Cassie's point
of view.
Ophellios was pacing, looking at Me, then Jake, then Emily. "First, there's you." he stopped at Emily. "The vampire obsessed blonde who doesn't like reading and likes to watch movies about zombies.You." he stood in front of Jake now. "The saint-like book protector who goes against his family rules to date a girl from another world." he stood in front of me now. "Then there's you. The pretty little girl vampire who refuses to drink blood and uses her aquaintances as human pillows. Not drinking blood makes you weak, does it not?" I didn't speak. "And you have the gift of the writer, don't you? You have the power to change the fate of Cenailli, yet you choose to do everything the hard way. Is that why you chose to handcuff yourself to the boy?" the men snickered, except for Ophellios and Charles, the man who had captured Jake and stabbed me with the vervain dart. "Charles, take them to their cells in the dungeon." Ophellios ordered, and Charles dragged me, Emily and Jake down to the dungeons.
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Yes, I like! I am VERY intrigued!!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is a part from the middle even!!!!!!!!!!!! I am very pleased with myself right now. I've been working on this story nonstop since Thursday.
ReplyDeleteI wondered what had happened to you! You kind of disappeared! I am very excited to read your new story though! MOre please????
ReplyDeleteOkay, okay.
ReplyDeleteThank you! Thank you! Thank you!!!!!!!
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