Prologue for TVND (The vampire next door)

It all started about a week after school ended. Emma-Rose Flemming was only twelve years old. Her seventeen year old brother Aaron and her four year old sister Meg were at their grandma's house. Emma-Rose was alone with he parents. She was trying to go to sleep when it happened. She heard voices-someone asking about her- downstairs, followed by her parent's screams. She heard two bodies drop to the ground and she hid in her closet. Emma-Rose cried softly in her closet before she heard someone coming into her room. The closet door flew open. A tall, thin, pale Asian girl stood there, blood covering her mouth. "Don't be afraid. My name is Emi." she said in an angelic voice. "Are you going to kill me?" Emma-Rose asked shakily. "No. Not yet." Emi dragged Emma-Rose out of the closet. "Follow my instructions." Emi cut her arm with her sharp teeth, and it began to bleed quickly. "Drink." Emma-Rose wearily did as Emi said. She put her pale hands on Emma-Rose's face. "Now what?" she asked. "Now I'm going to kill you." with a sickening crack, Emi snapped Emma-Rose's neck before running out the window with the police sirens approaching from about a block away. That's how Emma-Rose Flemming became a vampire.
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