The Chase Is ON: Help please!!!!

Tuesday, November 30, 2010

Help please!!!!

Okay, I am in serious need of help with my story called the Vampire Next Door. It's about a girl who's a vampire and his guy moves in next door who she likes but then his brother moves into town who IS a vampire, and then there's a whole thing wth evil Japanese vampires called the kinshinshi... Oy. I need help.

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wfdebickiNovember 30, 2010 at 5:34 PM
Good idea! Ok. So...you have to set the stage...introduce the character. Let us get to know her and tell us what her life and world are like. Maybe let us 'live in her world' a little before you get to the guy moving in. Perhaps let us follow her for a day or two and let us get into her head. Introduce the vampire idea and show us what it means to her maybe?
Then.... you could introduce the notion of a guy moving in... maybe have someone moving out of the house that she will miss? Then slide the guy in???
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wfdebickiNovember 30, 2010 at 5:35 PM
Maybe you could make a list of things that you would like to happen in the story? Then try to organize them into a basic plot line?
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Cameron Bright's Future Wife, He just doesn't know it yet.November 30, 2010 at 5:36 PM
I'm actually past that part... I just got an idea actually.
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wfdebickiNovember 30, 2010 at 5:37 PM
You might even be able to put some of your other stories together and knit them into the new story somehow? That is stories that you have not finished or have gotten stalled somehow?
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wfdebickiNovember 30, 2010 at 5:38 PM
Let me know when you have posted more!
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